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A Moment Frozen

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Wind, as cold as ice
Water freezes on the ground
Winter is coming.
Walking through the wind from my car to my work, crunching through the half-frozen grass.  Gotta love life.
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LegolasPanther's avatar
I tend to agree on this concept, as I have been writing for quite a few years. Most poetry (especially, haiku's, and other styles) don't tend to always use commas very much. If there is a continuance of thought that is offered in the poem, then enjambment is allowed. As for the critique in general, to me it feels unfair. As since grammar can go only so far in poetry.

~Legolas