Run Away With Me

I didn't really want to include a title with this one, mostly because it's supposed to be read as a part of the poem, but I feel like if I were to have just put it as the title, people wouldn't fully get what I'm trying to get across.  I actually wrote this one night after I had gone to see one of my friends.  I don't really remember writing it because I was really tired when I did, but I remember losing the inspiration after the last line, which is why I left it there.  I'm thinking of posting this one several different times with different punctuation, and perhaps with the extra stuff I wrote in there as one version, but I wrote the extra stuff the next day, so I don't feel like it has the same impact.

I punctuated it here the way I did to try to get across the way it should be read, and honestly I think this one is a little better appreciated read aloud.  I really like this one, personally because I wrote it to sort of have one message when you read each stanza as a collective piece, but the last line of each one speaks a little deeper than just running away with someone.  Buuuut, I think I'll leave that part open to interpretation.